Wonderful. I can picture her deciding to take David away from the Resistance, and leaving it all behind; you made her real and believable.

One problem I noticed: Ser Galen was supposedly killed in the explosion that killed his older son (David's brother). Duv believed this wholeheartedly; that's why he was shocked when Ser Galen showed up again. Yet you have him coming to David the night after his older brother died.